Sunday 4 November 2012

The Moonlit Sun (or Screwing With The Notion Of Objectivity)


The title of my poem, respectful Sirs, is The Moonlit Sun.
The Moonlit Sun? Ha ha, goodness, you must be joking boy, What age do you live in, we are men of science we are and we know better than that, do we not?
Oh, but you are old, old men and poor
That have not the gift of nonsense, beautiful nonsense
Oh, but do try dear Sirs and you shall see him as I do
He stands there, like a battle-ready warrior in his chariot
Eight horses made of fire, of fire and stone and light
Looking up into a star-studded night sky and his face is lit
Not by fire, kind Sirs, nay, but the soft, caressing glow of the Moon.
Tosh, boy, and stupidity! A diamond cannot be scratched as it is the hardest of them all and the Sun cannot be lit, it is the brightest of them all – use your head and get on with it!  
My head, polite Sirs, is where I seek, like all great scientists and poor fools of this age
We have found the particle, did you know, knowledgeable Sirs,
Higg’s boson has been found,
After searches high and low and now the scientists, bless them,
Face questions twice as profound
The answers to which, they shall delightedly tell you, they as yet do not know
For where is the wonder of seeking when all that is sought has been found
And where is the wonder of seeing when all that is to be seen is known!
Oh, open your eyes, obliging Sirs and you shall see him as I do
Tall and dark, a smile upon the lips...
...A discus in the right hand, a conch in the left and the Egyptians call me Ra
I stand here, basking in her light, her beautiful, mellow light
“Mellow coz’ its reflected light, reflected light!” they mutter
Ahhh, reflected light, that may be
But what a beauty, what a beauty is she!
Every night in that exquisite hour
Before the break of dawn (another story, that)
I stand here, the dutiful sun
I would rather bask in her glow (reflected, I know!)
For ever, and ever and more
But she has other places to see
And I shall follow where she goes…
You may think me a fool, wise Sirs
A charge I shall plead guilty to
But use your head, you said, and this is what it sees!
For one magical hour when the stars are all but gone
For one magical hour before his daily run
He stands in his chariot of fire,
A tall man of contented heart,
A smile on his lips and a glow on his face,
The Moonlit Sun.

8 comments:

Varun said...

Hey sid... good stuff!! typically you! :) I hope ppl dont accuse you of being chauvanistic.. too many sirs.. ;) ;) (I had that before) :P

Sid said...

Thanks!! :D

haha, well, I'll argue that this can be interpreted to mean that women are not old and boring :P

Sam said...

Women are definitely not as old and boring as stuffy Victorian male scientists ;)

Good work Sid, I especially like the contrast of your titles, it's like a beautiful poem on the one hand, and... screwing with the notion of objectivity on the other ;)

mythili said...

The appearance of Lord Rama who is the epitome of beauty, has been compared to the moon. Lord Rama belongs to the Sun Dynasty (Suryavansh.)
As beautiful as the Moonlit Sun?

Sid said...

Yaa! And He chooses to let his brilliance be overcome by that of the moon!

Anonymous said...

you certainly have a way with words Sid. Your blog posts have a nice mix of beauty,poetry, humour and some aesthetics. Yet can't figure out this quirky title Captain!Aye!Aye! sir, can't figure it out despite watching all the Pirates of the C.....
puthiravey irrukku, engeyo iddikkuthu thalaiva!

Nappinnai NC said...

HE(like me) is as hot as the Sun and as cool as the Moon. Flattery to Infinity:-)

Sid said...

Haha, isn't He just?! :)